today the sky called me up and said
hi, I saw that you went for a walk but you danced instead
did you realize, that people were looking at you
like you were out of your mind
well, it wasn’t my first time
over the top, you appeared to be manic
lonely girl trotting on toes
so out of control
just swaying to the music
maybe someday, sky, you and the people will realize, that we have to lose ourselves to this lucid music
and not always care about other people’s eyes
try it with me, sky
let’s go for a walk
and dance instead
let them look at us and wonder
how we’re out of your mind
let them look at us and wonder
how we’re two of a kind
Β© Lishaka Gulati
Beautiful π
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Thank you so much! βΊοΈπ
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My pleasure Lishaka π
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Truly, a beautiful piece, Lishaka! Thank you for visiting my blog and itβs good connecting with you. π
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Thank you so much!! Yes, I share the same pleasure π
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I like the freedom in this and the idea of not always caring about others eyes.
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Yess!! Wanted to spread that message across. So grateful that you liked it πβ€οΈ
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Oh I loved this poem! You took me by surprise (probably like you did the sky:) and I danced along side. Very creative, original with a perfect ending! Looking forward to reading more of you, Lishaka:)
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Thank you so much for your lovely words! ππβΊοΈ
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